Friday, January 23, 2009

Terrific Tootles by Bridgit from Miss Parish's Class

Whenever I think of the most surprising day I ever had, I still get shocked all over again. One cold rainy day, I was at school with nothing to do. The smell of stinky bathrooms invaded my nostrils. However, bathroom stench was soon erased with the aroma of pizza from the lunchroom. The cheesy treat made my taste buds so happy! I could not wait until lunch! Every time I hopped by a classroom, I could hear moans and groans from my fellow-students. As I was wondering the halls, I thought about how my days are repeated. Everyday seems like the same old routine. I was so bored, that is until I got home.

Instantly, my eyes were astonished! “Woof, Woof!” When I looked down, I saw the most beautiful sight in the world -- a brand new beagle! I was flabbergasted! We played and played until we couldn’t play any more. Then, I decided to name her. The new friend must have a name. I decided to call her “Tootles”. After thirty minutes, my dad and I skipped up to the store and bought her some toys and food. When we arrived back home, I roamed around my entire backyard with my K-9 in my arms. My dad drove us to my Mimi’s house. Mimi wanted to dress Tootles in her doll clothes. How funny is that? My beagle buddy liked to hop on my bed and watch TV with me. We almost fell asleep at suppertime from all the rough playing and getting to know each other. I had steak, and she had pizza with her Kibble. Soon after we biked back to our humble abode.

In the end, we were so exhausted. I fixed her a bed, and we fell fast asleep on the soft, cushiony, couch. My dad decided to put us both in my bed. A lot of excitement can come in dog form. My “doggie” surprise will never be forgotten! ”Woof!”

7 comments:

Anonymous said...

Bridgit, Your story was so amazing. I loved the description of your boring day in the beginning. I felt like I was right there with you, and being a dog lover myself, I loved the description of your new surprise. Great job! Keep it up.
Mrs. Hawthorne

Fourth Grade at Sneads Elementary said...

Bridgit, I am so proud of your writing! Your story is full of details and descriptions. I know you will do well on the test!

Keep working hard!
Miss Parish

Anonymous said...

That's what i am talking about!! hey Bridgit that was a wonderfull puppy story!! your b.f.f.l[best friend for life] Crystal[c-c]

Anonymous said...

i think your the best writer!

Anonymous said...

Puppies are amazing! Good chose! LOVE YOUR B.F.F. SIERRA!!!

Anonymous said...

you're the best! perfect!!!





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anonymous

Anonymous said...

i luv your stories your the best writer ever




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